2017年考研英語一小作文點評及范文

　　今年英語一的小作文不出預料，再一次考查到了推薦信。在英語一的考試當中，推薦信已經考查過兩年了。例如我們英語一在2011年就考查過向你的朋友推薦一部電影。具體題目要求是Write a letter to a friend of yours to1) recommend one of your favorite movies and;2) give reasons for your recommendation. 2015年考察的是you are going to hold a club reading session. Write an email of about 100 words recommending a book to the club members.You should state reasons for your recommendation. 而今年的作文題目要求給新來的澳大利亞國籍教授James Cook介紹你城市的tourist attraction。因此，考生不用驚慌只要把2011年或2015年的小作文，主要是推薦原因部分，稍作修改即可成文。這就啟發我們2018屆的同學們要高度重視歷年真題，因為考過的話題或是書信類型會反復考查。

　　那么今年的作文具體該如何來寫呢?今年考題的Direction要求向新來的James Cook教授推薦旅游景點。根據題目的要求，我們可以判斷本文為公務信函，語域為正式語域，即不能出現縮寫、省略問句和和口語表達。

　　稱呼： Dear Prof. James Cook, 注意稱呼中，Prof后面的句點不能丟，稱呼最后的逗號號不可丟，也不能寫成冒號。當然如果稱呼不寫Prof. 寫成Mr. James Cook 也是可以的。

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　　第一段：寫作內容需涵蓋兩點：1：歡迎Cook 教授來中國;2：寫信目的，表明推薦。用到了這樣的表達Welcome to China. I know you love traveling, so I’m writing this letter to recommend to you one of my favorite scenic spot- Harbin, which is an old northern city of China.

　　第二段： 寫作內容為推薦原因。可以從三個角度來考慮：美景、美食和熱情的人們。用到了這樣的表達：I think you must like it for the reasons as follows. To begin with, there are an amount of beautiful scenic spots, such as the Ice and Snow Kingdom in winter, the Sun island, the Central Street and so on. In addition, you could taste a great number of snacks on the average street. Last but not least, the people of Harbin are overwhelmingly hospitable and enthusiastic, which is famous all over China.

　　第三段：再次強調寫信目的。Owing to the reasons discussed above, I won’t hesitate to recommend this scenic spot to you. I am sure you will enjoy it. 最后，表達祝福 Best wishes for you!

　　落款： Yours sincerely, 特別提醒sincerely后面逗號不能丟;

　　簽名： Li Ming特別注意 Ming 后面一定不能出現句點。 落款和前面左、右對齊都可以。

　　參考范文：

　　Dear Prof. James Cook,

　　Welcome to China. I know you love traveling, so I’m writing this letter to recommend to you one of my favorite scenic spot—Harbin, which is an old northern city of China.

　　I think you must like it for the reasons as follows. To begin with, there are an amount of beautiful scenic spots, such as the Ice and Snow Kingdom in winter, the Sun island, the Central Street and so on. In addition, you could taste a great number of snacks on the average street. Last but not least, the people of Harbin are overwhelmingly hospitable and enthusiastic, which is famous all over China.

　　Owing to the reasons discussed above, I won’t hesitate to recommend this scenic spot to you. I am sure you will enjoy it. Best wishes for you!

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

2017考研英語(一)大作文范文

　　52.Directions:

　　Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In y essay. You should

　　1) describe the pictures briefly.

　　2) interpret the meaning,and

　　3) give your comments.

　　You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

　　左邊一副圖一個男孩放了好多書，沒有讀;右邊一個男孩正在讀書，針對本題，按照陳正康老師教的方法，三段式構思：

　　1.簡要描述-一人在空想，一人在行動!

　　2.分析引申義-行動的重要性

　　3.觀點建議-提倡行動

　　What is clearly presented in the picture is two opposite behaviors. In the first picture ,there are a lot of books besides a boy, but he doesn’t read any book at all. On the contrary，, the second boy is making a plan of reading and carrying it out. Nothing can be more far-reaching and thought-provoking than this drawing!

　　Apparently ,the implication of the given picture can be interpreted with regard to the significance of taking actions.No one can deny the fact that taking actions is extremely essential to achieve your goals. Only by putting your dream into action, can you really realize it. If you never take actions, you will never have a chance to win. Just as an old Chinese saying goes: “The journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step.” The more actions we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination. To further demonstrate the importance of taking actions, I would like to take a famous fable as a case in point: the Foolish Old Man who dreamed of removing the mountain in front of his gate began with carrying away small stones and finally realized his dream.

　　Consequently, I believe, on the one hand, our government and the media should lose no opportunity to publicize the importance of taking actions. On the other hand, in our daily life, more than just thinking of something, we have to put it into action. Only by doing so, can we achieve our objectives and realize our dream.